Thursday, June 21, 2012

AOI Statement - Paragraph 1

First Paragraph of AOI Statement - 



I have drafted the first paragraph of my personal project statement which will be identifying and explaining my topic. It will also include why I show personal interest in this particular project:




"Renewable Energy is a great way of saving our earth from environmental diseases such as global warming, pollution, resource repletion and more. My project is about environment and the consumption of resources, which has increased greatly over past few years. Renewable sources of wind and solar energy can be used to alleviate several issues the world faces today. Biomass, which is the usage of plant growth for energy, can save millions of resources that are being wasted consequently. I have always cared about the environment and followed environment friendly ways, which help the earth become a better place to live on. I have been linked with many energy projects in which I tried to establish the need to recycle and reuse materials. The environment has a huge role because it the first and foremost basis of our lives. Our actions on sustainable development and conservation are what improves and maintains our atmosphere. We have several responsibilities to our environment, which require deep understanding on every consequence that can occur. Therefore, I will be taking action on issues concerning our environment and what should be done to maintain and improve it."

I think I might need to refine some of the information because I feel I am repeating myself sometimes. Overall, I think I have nicely explained my topic and why I want to do this. 

Yavnika Kumar
21.06.12

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